World was on fire, no one could save me but you.
It’s strange what desire will make foolish people do.
I’d never dreamed that I’d need somebody like you,
And I’d never dreamed that I’d love somebody like you.
What a wicked game to play to make me feel this way,
What a wicked thing to do to let me dream of you,
What a wicked thing to say you never felt this way,
What a wicked thing you do to make me dream of you.
No, I wanna fall in love…
(…this world is only gonna break your heart…)
..with you…
Nobody loves no one.
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Hey, this is a great start to a legacy! Might I reccommend a few more pictures per chapter, maybe, and just make them a little larger? It’s a bit hard to see some of them. But I love the frame thing you have going on, and the plotline is certainly interesting! Keep writing!
Whoops, forgot to say it’s Zaffie from the Nightstar Legacy here. WordPress and Weebly accounts getting all confused. *facepalm*
Thank you so much for your comments and suggestions!
I love it so much 🙂
It’s an amazing start to a legacy, and I can already tell you’re getting more comfortable writing each chapter.
Like hawkalina said though, I’d add a few more photos, and also, to improve the quality, if you press control + shift + c, and enter the cheat hideheadlineeffects on, it will hide the plumbobs, speech bubbles, and other things alike, so they won’t show up.
Besides that though, I think it’s really awesome! Bookmarked and followed 🙂 I’m also going to add you to my blog links.
Awww, that’s awesome! Of course, I’ll add yours here. Thank you!
Although, I planned each chapter to have 50 photos, and I’m kind of reticent changing that *worried*.
Pff, for some reason, the link to your legacy won’t show up on my page, but I’ll try again later and definitely add you on my blog!
Hey, I started reading this legacy earlier and I’ve got to say, you’ve got me hooked. I really like your writing style and it seems like you got more comfortable in your writing as the chapters went on. I’ve added you to my blogroll 😀
Thank you so much! I’ll add you here right away!
I have finally caught up with this! Man, this is getting good! If I were Gia, I’d throw them bitches out of my house while they’re asleep! Let ’em wake up on the lawn. And I am VERY glad that Marcello (jerk) is out of the picture. He sucked! I like Rush – even if he is a little immature. 🙂
I agree with the previous commenters, I can see that you are really starting to hit your stride when it comes to the writing. Keep up the fantastic work!
Thanks alot, it means so much to hear this.
There, guys, I split chapters into pages! Hope it’s better now 🙂 hugs!
This is getting so good! I love love love Rush! I hope she is pregnant with his baby!
Aw, I love Rush too ❤
Awww yay! I’m so on team rush! lol
Me too, heh.